Writing Strands entry

Here is Alexander's paragraph for Writing Strands Level 3 Exercise #2.

" My paragraph

I was on the second floor of the gym with my friends, when a man from one of the basketball teams asked if we could look after his dog. The dog was definitely a small Bernese Mountain Dog. It was a pup. From my view, it looked like a stuffed bear. Even though the owner was below in the first floor, the dog was worried and wanted to see its owner. I knew this, because even when someone was petting the dog, it had no clue that someone was petting it; did not pay attention or want attention from any other person but its owner."

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